The horizontal bars here are more successfully integrated with your spreads, and utilizes the page (for composition) better than in the final crit piece.
Also, the alignment of the bars with the color gradient "key" works better here than the big separation in the final crit piece.
Therefore, for final reviews I would like to see you take everything you have done well with typography (very nicely done on the final crit piece) and everything you learned about accurately representing quantities and percentages accurately with the length of lines (very clear in the final crit piece) and combine that with the success of composition and consistency with spreads here.
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The horizontal bars here are more successfully integrated with your spreads, and utilizes the page (for composition) better than in the final crit piece.
Also, the alignment of the bars with the color gradient "key" works better here than the big separation in the final crit piece.
Therefore, for final reviews I would like to see you take everything you have done well with typography (very nicely done on the final crit piece) and everything you learned about accurately representing quantities and percentages accurately with the length of lines (very clear in the final crit piece) and combine that with the success of composition and consistency with spreads here.
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